Final Magazine

 Here are the images for my magazine cover, contents page, and double page spread

I'm  unable to add a flipbook because it says that my files exceed the file limit

Critical Self Reflection

 This is my Critical Self Reflection

Link to Critical Self Reflection, in case embed doesn't work

Front Cover Development

This is my development for my front cover

Reflection is one with my development

Exampples I found on the Internet

Rough Sketch

This is one of my first sketches thumbnail sketches. It's suppose to have the main Magazine name at the top and the main cover line underneath the The name of the Magazine. The line in the middle is suppose to represent the border between the sky and the ocean/beach. Since my art skills aren't too good, I think it 

This is a rough draft of what  my cover would be like,  I decided to change one of the texts to the right since I don't thin that it would be as visible if it was placed on the bottom left. In the original sketch, there was suppose to be some objects in the water, like people and boats scattered around, although I didn't include it in the rough sketch, since my artistic skills are limited.

I added a white border and began to try working on it on photoshop

This batch is my very first attempt at designing the front cover of my magazine I decided to start off with a white border, but then realized it didn't look too good. So then I tried using tan as my friend suggested, but i also didn't think it looked good. Eventually I landed on green from some magazine cover's I saw on the internet which looked somewhat decent.

Eventually i developed on this and began to add the coverlines. I used an extreme long shot, to show the scenery of the beach as well as the boats, this makes the viewer able to see Bali's scenery. I've attempted to capture the Bali's beach, since it's most known for having nice looking beaches. I thought the coverline needed to be readable so I made it a vibrant colour so that you can easily see it in front of the background. I then added a dark "Bali" text and put it behind the boats on the beach, from this point I just needed to complete my coverlines, but i still feel unsatisfied.

Those are a handful of typefaces and fonts that I found fitting for my front cover. I Decided to mix the 1st and 2nd typeface as my Masthead. For the front cover, I used the 2nd typeface for buzzwords and decided that the 4th typeface would fit as a subheading for my article, and the 5th would be for my article text. I didn't use the 3rd example as I feel like it wouldn't fit with the sleek look that I have for my magazine I chose these typefaces since they are more simplistic fit the convention of typefaces in travel magazines being more simple and less flashy. this also makes the viewer of the magazine to focus more on the scenery instead of the text, since it's kept simple.

After feedback from my associates, they mentioned that the colours didn't work well, I agreed with them and decided to redo my front cover, now with more knowledge and trying out one of the example as inspiration. The colour white is a safe colour to use since, it compliments most things. The white colour also keeps the cover feel more modern, since less vibrant colours are being used in modern projectsI began with making "hopper" a little different from "island" in "Island Hopper" so that it doesn't look too boring. I kept the boats so that it can use blocking to block a small part of the the "BALI" text to make it less boring. I then added the thin square border to shape the margins inside the box. I then added a white "BALI" text behind boats and added the coverlines. Eventually I thought that there wasn't enough space so I enlarge the box giving it more space. I then finally added a small shadow on my coverline so that it's readable, as well as added the barcode and altering the recoloring the image to look more appealing.

My teacher recommended that I add a price somewhere on the cover. So I decided to place it near the bar code since it looked like an available spot to put the price.

Contents Page Development

 This is my contents page development

Reflection is one with my development

Here are some examples

Again I began designing with using one of the examples as a base and working off of that. I used another image of one of Bali's beaches in an extreme long shot and took it form a different angle to keep it different from the front cover. I included some of the boats that were docked near the beach, since it's design is part of  Bali's culture. I then added a banner in white, carrying over the modern simplistic design from the front cover. on the close right side where my contents would be in. Later on, I decided to move it to the right since that feels more comfortable with me. At first, I felt like using black text on a white background looked good, but later on felt like it looked too boring for the page numbers, and felt like it didn't pop out as much. So, I decided to replace the black text with something transparent, revealing slightly more of the image behind the banner, making it standout more from the white banner. I used different typefaces so that the reader can quickly and obviously understand what they're looking at, and make it easier for their eyes to navigate. I also removed a kid that was accidentally included in the image to make it cleaner. Then, I finally added some finishing touches to the image I took to make it more appealing.

My teacher noticed that the texts weren't aligned and the spacings were off as well as recommending a more left aligned text instead of justified, and a website. So I fixed the spacing and added a website on the bottom right. This would be good for the younger audience since they may want more digital ways to view the magazine. I put the website on the bottom right just in case they needed it.

Double Page Spread Development

 Here is my Double Page Spread Development

Reflection is one with my development

Examples:

Since I started to have some experience, I went straight into designing the double page spread, and took inspiration from one of the examples again. I once again used another extreme long shot, of Bali's beach, but and to subtly include some of the people in the image, to show the viewer that people at the are having a good time in Bali's beach, and may convince them. The image focuses on the small Balinese structure to keep Bali's culture in view and somewhat at the center. I started off using the example as a base and continuing from there. I really liked this example since it focuses on the main image, and has good white space, as well as keeping the modern feel with using grayscale colours, like white. I separated the article better using margin columns since my teacher had recommended it, and it makes it look more neat and organized. I then added the rest of the article on the right side of the page and put a black gradient behind it so that it can easily be read. I also made the image fill up more space so that the is utilized nicely. I used different typefaces to easily differentiate the article, heading and subheading to make it more pleasant for the reader to navigate through the contents page. then added the page numbers as well as a caption under the image with their own unique typefaces. I finally added some finishing touches to the image, like slightly changing the colours.

A drop cap was recommended by my teacher, as well as separating the first paragraph of the article into two so it looks more appealing. He also told me to include the name of who wrote the article. He also thought the text looked a bit too bold, so I decided to change the font to make it look less bold 

Article

 This is my first draft for my article

I found creating my article pretty challenging, since I've never had to write a 700 word article before for an assignment. Although I think I may have managed to do this by separating each beach into segments so that it's more bite-sized for me

Always one for everyone

    The Island of the God’s popular beaches present you with stunning landscape, clean blue waters, and countless fun activities. There’s always a beach for everyone there, from rocky shores that underline cliffs, to a more clean transition between land and sea with even cleaner water. Each beach has their own characteristic that accords to your liking. No beach feels the same like the other, there’s always one for you. Want a beach that provides extreme water sports action? Try out Kuta Beach. Maybe you want a more calming experience with a breathtaking view of the sunset and hear the wonderful melody of the waves kissing land, Sanur Beach is the answer. How about a place of interaction, and get to know the island more with its amazing stories, friendly hospitality, and cultural craftsmanship give Legian Beach a try. Or maybe instead of that, you want interactions with people like you and tourists alike to share experiences and opinions on Bali, then Seminyak Beach is the place for you. Or maybe you’d want to fill your stomach from your long venture throughout Bali and experience its wonderful seafood cuisine. Come and have a meal at Jimbaran Bay.

Sanur Beach

    Explore Sanur Beach, step onto the powdery sands, let the gentle waves be your lullaby, creating a peaceful symphony for your getaway. Embrace the magic of sunrise trots along the pristine shore, setting the tone for a day of relaxation. Venture into the crystal clear waters to discover vibrant coral reefs beneath the surface. With beachside cafes offering fantastic ocean and sunset views, Sanur calls you to explore the embrace of Bali's natural beauty.

Kuta Beach

    Step onto one of Bali’s wonderful shores, feel the energy of the island through the lively atmosphere. Embrace the thrill of surfing the popular waves or simply take in the sun's warm embrace. Join other travellers in celebration, as the sky transforms into a canvas of vivid Colours. The beach comes alive with beachfront bars and restaurants offering a taste of Bali's nightlife. Whether you're a seasoned surfer or a sunset enthusiast, Kuta Beach invites you to dive into the vibrant spirit of Bali's most iconic playground.

Mertasari Beach

    Nearby Sanur Beach, you can find its brother, Mertasari beach. As you walk the soft, snow-like sands, enjoy the peace that envelopes this hidden gem. Dip your toes into the calm waters and let the tranquil waves become your melody. Mertasari's charm lies in its beauty and unspoiled nature. With a view of swaying palms and a horizon that stretches infinitely, it's your personal retreat. Embrace the seclusion, unwind, and let Mertasari Beach be the tranquil chapter in your Bali adventure, a haven known only to those who seek true serenity with one another.

Jimbaran Bay

    Bali's culinary delights meet the ocean's embrace. As you step onto the golden sands, The sizzling sound of seafood gives your senses a party. Immerse yourself in the unique dining experience as local chefs prepare your feast right on the beach. Picture yourself under the stars viewing the golden sunset, while enjoying the freshest catches with the gentle soothe of waves. From grilled fish to succulent prawns, Jimbaran's beach side restaurants offer a mouth-watering journey like no other. Join us for a night of culinary joy.

Legian Beach

    Step into the vibrant heart of Bali at Legian Beach, where the warmth of the community welcomes you with friendly intent. Wander through the bustling markets, local artisans craft handmade treasures and authentic smiles. Engage in the lively beach culture, where surfers dash through waves, inviting you to join the fun. Explore beachfront cafes where locals share stories over Balinese coffee. Legian is more than a beach; it's a place of hospitality and shared experiences. Embrace the friendship and immerse yourself in Legian's community and save a cherished chapter in your Bali journey.

Seminyak Beach

Join fellow travellers like you and engage in the lively banter at beach clubs, where you can have conversations of your experience in Bali, while cocktails flow and music sets the rhythm for your day. As the sun dips low, join the friendly gatherings during sunset and share moments etched into your Bali memories. Seminyak is a social sanctuary to make friends and tourists like you from around the globe.

Double Page Spread

 This is my Double Page Spread Research and Development

I originally had created one table for one magazine, but sadly I lost it and it wasn't saved. So I had to chose a different magazine but still related to my project. Didn't feel too difficult creating this as all I needed to do was analyze the double page spread of my magazine.

Before Reading
Magazine:	How it works
Issue:	Date of Issue/ Issue No.:
Publisher:	Future Publishing Ltd.
Genre:	Animals, Pets
Images:	2 images, one with a cat and a dog, and another where a cat in interacting with another cat
Layout	The right page has a medium amount of text and the left page has very little text. the page numbers are 20 and 21. The whitespace seems to be used good enough, and it has quite a unique drop cap.
First impressions:	The double page spread has some colours to keep it interesting instead of just blank white space, and the images seem big enough to have good negative space.
After Reading
Heading:	Cat's vs Dogs
Subheading:	How the psychology and biology of the world s most popular pets compare
Author:	Scott Dutfield
Article:	it gives a history lesson about the 2 domestic animals, dating back to the prehistoric age and how they evolved until the modern age
Mode of address:	It doesn't address the audience at all
Pull Quote:	No pull quote was used
Audience:	People who are interested in the history of Cats and Dogs, Pet lovers, Paleontologists. The pet lovers are targeted with the wholesome images of cats and a dog with some colour, while paleontologists may be targeted due to the information in the article.
Impression:	I thought the article was pretty fun, it gave some fun facts about the pets that I don't think a lot of people know. Although I definitely won't remember these fun facts
Inspiration:	I like how they used the white space in this magazine, although I think I might replace the orange background colour with a really large image of my own

 

Before Reading
Magazine:	Lionmag
Issue:	June - July2022
Publisher:	Bentang Media Nusantara
Genre:	Travel
Images:	2 images of Bali's iconic destinations, one of GWK and the other of Pura Lempuyangan
Layout	It's pretty heavy on text especially on the bottom. The page numbers are 14-15. The drop cap, although very slightly different looks different, still looks basic. There's an alright amount of negative space.
First impressions:	I don't like how there's so much text, I think a travel magazine should lean more towards the visuals
After Reading
Heading:	No heading
Subheading:	Garuda Winsu Kencana Cultural Park, and Pura Lempyungan
Author:	No author name was given
Article:	The article gives a history and gives information about GWK and Pura Lempyungan the 2 locations that are on the image.
Mode of address:	It never addresses the reader
Pull Quote:	No Pull quote was given
Audience:	People who are intrigued about Bali especially GWK and Lempyungan, however, the article is typed in bahasa, so I think it aims to people who are still in Indonesia but would like to visit Bali. They're targeted by using the Indonesian language.
Impression:	I think the article was between boring and fun. I found the information and the history that was displayed to be quite intersesting, but in the beginning I thought it would be boring since there was so much text.
Inspiration:	I learned that too much text can be unappealing, and I don't think I would include heavy text on my magazine.

Location and Scout Risk Assessment

This is My Location Scout Risk Assessment

Link to Photos

Location #1 Komune Beach

Edward Louis Aguila
Purpose of the shoot	Preview some of the beaches of Bali via pictures to promote Bali's Beaches to travelers and tourists through magazines
Media Language	Extreme Long Shots to show most of the beach and landscape, Day time and sunny to since most beaches portrayed in media tend to be during daytime, so I would conform to that expectation, Static Establishing Shots to showcase the landscape of the beaches to the most I can
Pros of Location	Realistic, Authentic, Easy Access (Near to Home)
Cons of Location	Trash could be littered, Change in weather may not be expected, People around the beach may have harmful acts or interupt shooting
Alternative Location	Different Beach (The beach selected could be difficult to travel to since it may be too far away. If this is the case, Traveling to a beach closer to my location can make it less of a hassle.)
RISK ASSESMENT
Potential Hazards	- Natural Disasters (Tsunami) - Heavy rainy weather
Evaluate Risks	- Possible Natural Disaster
Control Measures	- Come at a later time - Check the weather to anticipate any disruptions
Implementation Timeframe	I'll check surroundings before every photoshoot

Location #2 Sanur Beach

Edward Louis Aguila
Purpose of the shoot	Showcase Sanur beach for my magazine to convince travelers that Sanur beach is great
Media Language	Extreme Long Shots, Establishing Shots, Sunny Day, Static Shots. Not too different from the last one since they're both at the beach
Pros of Location	Realistic, Authentic, Easy Access (Near to Home)
Cons of Location	Too much people during a specific time, garbage littered at the shores
Alternative Location	Different Beach (The beach selected could be difficult to travel to since it may be too far away. If this is the case, Traveling to a beach closer to my location can make it less of a hassle.)
RISK ASSESMENT
Potential Hazards	- Natural Disasters (Tsunami) - Heavy rainy weather
Evaluate Risks	- Possible Natural Disaster
Control Measures	- Come at a later time - Check the weather to anticipate any disruptions
Implementation Timeframe	I'll check surroundings before every photoshoot