1st Attempt Storyboard

This is my 1st attempt at a story board

Self Reflection:

I didn't really like how all my camera movements were too generic, next time I think ill try to add          more interesting camera movements and a more interesting editing transitions. I think adding music would make the advertisement more interesting than only having diegetic sound and if possible, I'll try to make diegetic sound match to the beat of the non-diegetic music. I didn't like how my drawings look, I think more detail would've been better. Like drawing an actual suit instead of just writing the word "suit" but I'm still unsure if I should do that since my drawing skills aren't the best. I might want to add more shots, so that the advertisement isn't too boring. I enjoyed how the panels are symmetrical, but I didn't use it in the final storyboard I ended up adding more shots of the office worker, to hammer in the fact he's an office. I also replaced the sandwich with just the lunch box for comedic effect. I've also added a better slogan for the shots where the text "beng-beng" is present. And played around with shots 8 and 9.